tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-566910144128958757.post8380497700120008268..comments2023-04-30T00:48:50.178-07:00Comments on Core Biology I Honors: An Ocean Instrument Is Born Meet SID: the Submersible Incubation Device Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08576127734266494869noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-566910144128958757.post-82130049097881014462013-11-08T12:06:05.823-08:002013-11-08T12:06:05.823-08:00James, I thought that you did a great job with thi...James, I thought that you did a great job with this article. The way you split up your summary into three paragraphs made it a lot easier to follow along and process, without getting bored. I also thought that your relevance paragraph was very nicely written, and helped me make the connection between the topic and today's society that I would not have formed on my own. Thirdly, I thought that your critique was very well stated, and had many good ideas that I wish the author of the article you did your report on could see.<br />One of the things that I learned from reading your report is that photosynthesis occurs underwater as well as on land. This was interesting because I would have thought that phytoplankton along the seafloor would have a hard time performing photosynthesis, given the small amount of light that penetrates that deep in the ocean. Another thing I learned was that scientists have created mini-submarine labs that are able to function at depths of two miles. <br />I did think that your report could have had a bit more of a personal side attached to it, instead of an almost mechanical seeming one.Brendan Forsthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02526221533810410304noreply@blogger.com