tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-566910144128958757.post5525978337145206384..comments2023-04-30T00:48:50.178-07:00Comments on Core Biology I Honors: Baby’s Gaze May Signal Autism, a Study FindsAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08576127734266494869noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-566910144128958757.post-47982886534394121592013-12-17T14:35:00.768-08:002013-12-17T14:35:00.768-08:00Freddie did a great job summarizing the tests that...Freddie did a great job summarizing the tests that they did on the infants for diagnosing autism. She also brought up many statistics, which gave the reader an understanding of why the topic is so relevant. She also emphasized that the eye-tracking technology can help halter autism in infants and children, which made it clear why the research behind the article was so important. One thing that I didn’t know before reading her review was that the rate of autism among infants has increased between 2002 and 2008. One thing I found interesting was also the fact that it’s eye contact that the autistic children have a problem with. It made me wonder if autism can be partly prevented if mother’s socialize/ make more eye contact with their children while they are young or if the child’s environment has larger effects on it than we think. Overall, Freddie provided a lot of good information about the research, although she could have brought up earlier research about the topic in order to explain improvements or news. Emme Kerjhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07483812723345100779noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-566910144128958757.post-41066838140102178272013-11-11T05:55:52.696-08:002013-11-11T05:55:52.696-08:00Good job Freddie! This was a very well written and...Good job Freddie! This was a very well written and informative report on a very important topic. You were very helpful in describing terms that may not have been known to everyone who was reading this. The report was very well organized and you displayed many great writing skills. It is very nice how you worked at that school and thats great that a personal experience inspired you to write this because it really adds to the report on a personal level. I think this was beautifully written, however there were one or two sentences that sounded a bit awkward to me. I hop one day they find a cure to a very serious disease and this current event report was really good!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14698470667629038803noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-566910144128958757.post-72822280640098256692013-11-07T20:41:16.198-08:002013-11-07T20:41:16.198-08:00Freddie, great job. I found this review very insig...Freddie, great job. I found this review very insightful and interesting. In the beginning of your summary, you did a very nice job with defining key terms and people which was helpful to the reader to get a sense of what was going on. In addition, you had a very nice flow to your writing, and every fact that you presented was written clearly and in an orderly fashion. One could tell that your relevance paragraph was written with care, and it shows. I liked how you brought up your personal experience working at the school for autistic children. I learned that one could tell how severely autistic, or if the child even is autistic, the child is by looking into their eyes. For instance, the autism would be more severe if the child could not look at you directly in the eye. I also learned that the cause of autism is sometimes based off of the age of the male which is very interesting. Your current event had a great tone to it and I do not have much to criticize. However, I would spell out my numbers when writing a formal piece. Other than that, your current event was great!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12842351234216992321noreply@blogger.com