tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-566910144128958757.post4560593560010645311..comments2023-04-30T00:48:50.178-07:00Comments on Core Biology I Honors: Global Temperatures Highest in 4,000 YearsAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08576127734266494869noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-566910144128958757.post-5576986109740073982013-04-22T12:13:19.933-07:002013-04-22T12:13:19.933-07:00Bailie Jones
4/22/13
Great job on your review gre...Bailie Jones<br />4/22/13<br /><br />Great job on your review greg. I thought it was very interesting and i learned a lot. First of all i thought your opening was very interesting. It hooked me right away and i wanted to keep reading. I also liked all the information you gave us in this article and how you combined fact form the article with some of your own opinions. One thing i think you could have improved was to summarize the article with a little more detail. Over all it was very interesting and i really enjoyed reading it.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08604582750148719865noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-566910144128958757.post-24457997402468444892013-04-12T10:42:38.435-07:002013-04-12T10:42:38.435-07:00Greg, I thought you did a great job writing your c...Greg, I thought you did a great job writing your current event report. First off, I thought the way you opened your essay was very impressive. It really grabbed my attention, and made me actually want to continue to read it. Secondly, the way you wrote your essay, your tone, really made your essay a lot more interesting to read. Thirdly, it really seemed like you connected to your topic really well. It seemed as if you were really interested, and did further research connecting to your topic.<br /> I never knew the effect global warming is having on our world today. One fact that I was really impressed by, and did not realize, is our climate is at its warmest point today than it has been in the past four thousand years. Learning this fact worries me for our future, in the fact that it is still rising, and probably will be for a long time. That the hottest temperatures ever will be recorded on earth. Another fact that I found to be really interesting is that, without humans, the Northern Hemisphere probably would have frozen over in the next few thousand years but the large amounts of greenhouse gases from people might stop that.<br /> I really thought this was a great essay. I don’t think this needs much improvement. I really liked how it seemed you were really interested in your topic and gave great opinions.<br />Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05241593202136865642noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-566910144128958757.post-19870045946951024252013-04-11T19:35:47.815-07:002013-04-11T19:35:47.815-07:00This report was very good and one thing that I rea...This report was very good and one thing that I really liked about it was the way it started with a hook. This hook got me caught and made me want to keep reading your article. Also, I liked how you had a tone throughout the summary that worried me. Lastly, I thought that your analysis in this summary was great and it was interesting to read your ideas on this article. <br /><br />There were a couple things that I did not know that were really interesting to learn. The one that really jumped out to me was that the earth's temperature is the highest its been in the last four thousand years, which scares me for our future. Also, the fact that humans are not the sole contributor to global warming was new to me reading this summary and another one on the blog and that interested me and scared me as well. <br /><br />In general, I thought this report was very good, but I think you could've made it a little clearer when you were summarizing the article versus adding your own insight to it. It was a little unclear sometimes and it would be an easy fix if you just used a couple phrases such as in this article. Michael Crawfordhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11606070450746036131noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-566910144128958757.post-907193901097777312013-04-09T15:52:28.781-07:002013-04-09T15:52:28.781-07:00Nice work Greg. You're summarization and analy... Nice work Greg. You're summarization and analysis were on point and you always backed up everything with your own point of view. Greg found a great way of connecting with the article, relating the inadequacies scientists face. <br /> On another note, the article is somewhat alarming. The fact that the earth's temperature is it's highest in the last four thousand years is probably not a good thing. It's also not a good thing that the temperature will continue to increase in further years. <br /> Improvement wise I don't see a need for much. Maybe a little less analysis and more summarization? If anything. Other than that I see nothing to change.John Yiengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14056374163215812686noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-566910144128958757.post-62781677770810462702013-04-07T17:37:32.033-07:002013-04-07T17:37:32.033-07:00Zach Shively
4.7.13
Biology H
Current Event Blog C...Zach Shively<br />4.7.13<br />Biology H<br />Current Event Blog Comment<br />Global Temperatures by Greg Mo<br /> Overall Greg did a fantastic job explaining the article he read stated and then added in his own personal point of view to finish up his report. Specifically, I liked how he used gave the name of a real scientist studying global warming (Shaun Marcott of Oregon State University) rather than simply referring to the researchers as scientists. By giving the name it adds to the realism of his report. Furthermore, I loved that Greg found a way to connect with the scientists in saying, “It is definitely hard for a scientist or someone who is familiar with a scientific study to put it into terms the every day person could understand as you need to put it into words that make sense.” Though this does not fully relate to Greg’s main point, it gives the reader an interesting new point of view. Also his writing style and sentence structures made it a very enjoyable and stimulating piece of writing. <br /> The fact that the earth’s temperature is at its highest in four thousand years frightens me. Lets just say I am going to do a lot more walking after reading this piece. Even more frightening though, is the idea that earth will see even hotter temperatures in upcoming decades. <br /> To improve this report I would suggest that Greg did less analyzing and more presenting of facts. For example, when he explained how graphs showed temperatures will increase in the coming years, it would have been more interesting to see the graph or at least here the real statistics it presented. <br />Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07798174249435065256noreply@blogger.com