tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-566910144128958757.post4502648020724016935..comments2023-04-30T00:48:50.178-07:00Comments on Core Biology I Honors: Kevin HEndrick Current EventAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08576127734266494869noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-566910144128958757.post-53325297405888211132015-04-13T20:16:30.671-07:002015-04-13T20:16:30.671-07:00Kevin and I did the same article and I thought Kev...Kevin and I did the same article and I thought Kev did a splendid job. He summarized the steps like a champ. He did an amazing job of connecting it to us and the article selection was superb. We can all relate to this terrifying disease. <br /><br />I learned a lot about Ebola because I haven't been paying much attention to what has being going o with it lately. I stopped following it a few months ago and it is good to have it back on my radar.<br /><br />Kev could have checked his facts a wee bit better. There has in fact been a case of Ebola in the states. Peter Meyershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14327850287599066831noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-566910144128958757.post-50843404528394935362015-04-07T17:01:25.469-07:002015-04-07T17:01:25.469-07:00Wow Kevin. Ebola is quite a popular topic so in th...Wow Kevin. Ebola is quite a popular topic so in that way you picked an intriguing article. I especially enjoyed how you chose an article that discussed possible solutions for the virus rather than another shock story of an outbreak. In addition, I appreciate how you gave a little appetizer to the issue, so that there was enough background information for people who are not as up-to-date with this topic to understand. Another aspect of your review I was impressed with was your knack for intertwining quotes therefore displaying credibility in what you are writing about. Perhaps to add a little meet to your write-up I would have included contrasting views to Dr. Kim’s on how we may go about stopping the growth of Ebola, just for another perspective of what’s out there. geohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06681377233244113663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-566910144128958757.post-71578388678037293272015-04-06T18:36:06.177-07:002015-04-06T18:36:06.177-07:00Kevin did a great job getting me intrigued into hi...Kevin did a great job getting me intrigued into his blog post, because he picked an article about solving Ebola not another case of it. There was a good amount of exposition, to create the scene for people that are not tuned in as much to this issue. Kevin also kept the idea that this post was about solving Ebola throughout the post. I was impressed by his use of facts and quotations, which gave his post credibility. I was also impressed by his ability to stay on topic about solving Ebola, since this epidemic is such a big issue it would have been easy for him to stray off of ideas for solutions. I don’t see much wrong with this post, so I would suggesting additions to it like giving examples of countries who are successful and unsuccessful against Ebola, or giving us other doctors’ point of views of how to solve this epidemic and then comparing them to Dr. Kim’s ideas. Ara Atayanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02626347909181766361noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-566910144128958757.post-73898388571103905932015-04-06T18:28:17.525-07:002015-04-06T18:28:17.525-07:00Kevin all around gave a great intro to what the ar...Kevin all around gave a great intro to what the article was about, and what he was going to talk about. Kevin provided a great background, and was able to support his background with facts about Ebola and certain details that made me enjoy his current event. Kevin was able to give step by step analysis of how to stop the spread of Ebola. His use of detailed information made this easy to read and easy to follow. All around, I really enjoyed reading this current event because of how well it was written.Aidan Flanneryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05119164327949943199noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-566910144128958757.post-86290738882703332252015-03-26T20:09:54.441-07:002015-03-26T20:09:54.441-07:00You immediately get the idea established about the...You immediately get the idea established about the topic and get me interested. You provide a general background and details of the article to allow us to get an understanding of the article. When it comes to talking about providing care for the people with ebola, you make a strong argument to why we should provided the needed funding to aid these people. I was impressed by the use of information to help deepen the understanding of the article and the arguments you put in to support why we should try to fight ebola with what resources we can. The one suggestion is include some ways countries are trying to combat the ebola virus.Liam Siegalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11870724881327772250noreply@blogger.com